Tasogare no Utsuwagami - Ch. 1.1 - The River

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Trying to do a shonen/seinen series, take two (since I stepped on somebody's toes with the last one I attempted). Was anyone waiting to do this?

Hopefully I didn't make any horrible/shameful mistakes with the kanji readings and the specific translations and whatnot, but feel free to laugh - I mean, to point them out if so.

And sorry it cuts out right in the middle of the action! But 1.2

finishes on a cliffhanger as well

so I'm not being as stingy as you might think.
 
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Dumbass error: Hana's sidekick is Hachi, not Hatsu (somehow I missed that the first time this comes up it makes it very clear it's the kanji, not the hiragana). A small thing (he's only named a few times in this first chapter), but I figured if there's a mistake I know for certain is there, I might as well fix it. Should be correct now.

1.2 and 2.1 are more or less finished and ready to go, so there's definitely more coming unless anyone else steps in before then.
 

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