It's honestly not bad at all. Having kept up with the novel as it's been translated, I can say that while it has it's clumsily written moments, there's a lot of interesting stuff too. Also pretty funny (I mean the guy made this scumbag run through the street naked lmao). Not sure what people were annoyed about to warrant so many low ratings, I wonder did they want the MC to be an actual piece of shit who uses the hypnosis app like in porn? Because that's sort of the opposite of the premise of this one (kinda).
Thanks for the chapter.