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B bdenra Member Joined Apr 26, 2019 Messages 72 Dec 17, 2020 #2 Wow you're on a roll, thanks for all the chapters! On page 5, it might be "salon" instead of "saloon" based on context but I am not sure.
Wow you're on a roll, thanks for all the chapters! On page 5, it might be "salon" instead of "saloon" based on context but I am not sure.
caitsith Group Leader Joined Jan 20, 2019 Messages 1,527 Dec 18, 2020 #4 I think "parlor" might have worked better than "saloon" here, but that's just me. Also that phone call was unexpectedly wholesome. Thanks for the double release, by the way. I don't think I could have handled that kind of cliffhanger.
I think "parlor" might have worked better than "saloon" here, but that's just me. Also that phone call was unexpectedly wholesome. Thanks for the double release, by the way. I don't think I could have handled that kind of cliffhanger.
