Teisou Gyakuten Sekai de Yuiitsu no Otoko Kishi no Ore, Onna Kishi Gakuen ni Nyuugaku Shitara Nazeka Eiyou Atsukai Sareta: Zetsurin Skill de Harem Mu…

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Honestly without the rewrite this would be much better...

I mean like "Forget the groceries let us rather eat a creampie okay?" was turned to "Forget groceries, let's get you nailed instead, huh?"
The original is much funnier and feels less threatening and more like a pick up line.

There are many sentences like this dunno why the tl does this even when he has clearly a degree of profit in his eye... not to mention not translating the words that are wobbled during snusnu, perhaps he is mtling this but that is even less reason to rewrite the sentences...
 
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