Teitenjou no Ie - Oneshot

[MangaDex]

 

[Tomibiki]

.... HOW DID THEY DO IT???? 😵‍💫

 

[Ochrolv]

Idk about you guys & I'm not claustrophobic but if I woke up somewhere like that especially pitch black like that then you best believe I would freak the fuck out. Anyways when I saw her tongue on page 17 I immediately knew something was up & didn't expect that end besides a splat. Thanks for the translations.

 

[MangaField]

Awesome premise but amateurish implementation. Pacing was all over the place, psychological insight was basically non-existent, unnecessary fan-service, no emotion, logical plot holes….

Now I‘d really like to see a 1 volume manga with this exact premise, but written by an actual good storyteller.

 

[77BLc9JwJGpLVARkamJx]

I really dont like enclosed space like this and its dark as hell too? I would probably died of cardiac arrest already.

 

[Hicleric]

80% intriguing, but damn that ending was edgelord terrible.

 

[Sonaldo]

I really dont like enclosed space like this and its dark as hell too? I would probably died of cardiac arrest already.

The anxiety alone would've killed me.

 

[Coldlight]

It was a nice try on a concept based on claustrophobia, but it lost me after pg. 25 with what seemed like plot holes when she became pregnant and he assumed he was the father. Did he (or the author) not know how humans reproduce? It's impossible for them to have done it in that extremely cramped space, nevermind that there was no indication they ever did it; and there was no evidence of IVF or the like happening.

Anyway, the "child" that allegedly popped out of her was clearly not his (assuming they even found a way to do it) and more like a parasitic alien horror that reproduced asexually using host bodies or a monster that transformed into doppelgangers.