TELOMERE - Ch. 16 - Farewell/Goodbye

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Oh no, they got Ooga Booga!!

The action was a little hard to follow. I hope this wasn't the last chapter. There's lots of unanswered questions.

Thanks for the chapter.
 
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This has been a really weird series and not in the best way. I mean... ending it there would leave tons of questions everywhere but I guess actually killing off one of the main characters would be the way to say "yeah we're done."

Either that or they are taking a while, since it really doesn't say anything about "end" there like it usually does in an axe.
 
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Morbid thought: Imagine the author had died irl and this was the last chapter...
 

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That just felt super rushed… like a series of events that would have happened across multiple chapters squashed into 1
 
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Empty balloon on the top left of page 10, near "Let's end this!"
Empty balloon on the top center of page 13.
 
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This has been a really weird series and not in the best way. I mean... ending it there would leave tons of questions everywhere but I guess actually killing off one of the main characters would be the way to say "yeah we're done."

Either that or they are taking a while, since it really doesn't say anything about "end" there like it usually does in an axe.
I know, plus if he's still alive in the next chapter, all that "Kill me, let the rest live!" feels like... "You know you just wasted that bullet, right?"
 
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such awful pacing, I feel like this tried to take the good ideas from heavenly delusion and color of the end and failed completely.
 

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