Tenchou to Mujikakuna Tennin - Vol. 2 Ch. 45

[MangaDex]

 

[Shinano-Chan]

What Maya was thinking about doing:

Also, if you are quick enough to look when I release a chapter, you'll see I always forget to add the volume number since my other series doesn't have them.

 

[Kaarme]

I suppose I should have expected it, with the manager looking so youthful, but I thought the little sister is only in high school herself. In fact, it's actually more plausible that she's living in the brother's house if she's a uni student now. They move out as a matter of course, unlike high school kids. After all, there often isn't even a choice but to move (their new specialised college/university/other school is often far away), and being young adults, they want to move out and get independent.

A landline phone, huh. Those are getting exceptionally rare where I live. Already twenty or more years ago phone companies, turned primarily carriers/ISPs, began to push people to voluntarily get rid of their landline deals. They even marketed mobile phones that were made to look like landline phones to older customers who wanted to stick to their trusty old phone. There were also GSM modems being marketed that allowed an old phone to be connected to the digital mobile network (sound quality was typically dreadful, though). Nowadays there isn't much left of the telephone lines anyway. The copper got recycled and company expenses reduced.

 

[SomeFreak]

Gal peace indeed 🫡

 

[Hauberk1800]

Thanks for the tl

 

[blablablub]

Is 20
Behaves like a twelve your old

 

[e5GQ5WaBq1CbxqKmeXmo]

Some possible changes:

Page 5:
"Sure is! But since it was a mutual agreement" -> "It's fine, I consented"
"What do you mean 'agreement'? Stop talking like that" -> "Don't phrase it like that"
"* It hasn't been that long, though". -> "Not that you didn't"

Not sure if consented is the right word, seems it should be suggestive.

Page 6:
"HAH [..]" -> "You're younger then him?"
"A message for me!?" -> "And younger than me!?"

Page 8:

My best guess is "I'm lacking something, what is it? An adult's composure?"

"Then how did it end up like this [...] I knew it! You do [..]" -> "Then how did you become like this? I've got it, you have someone you like!"
"The person I like" -> "Someone I like..."

Pg 9:
"Who you do think [...] Are you there" -> "I wonder. Maybe there is, maybe there isn't"
"I feel so sluggish" -> "I know, right?" / "You don't say"

 

[henman]

So many translation errors...do you translate it with machine only?

 

[Shinano-Chan]

So many translation errors...do you translate it with machine only?

Yes, you are correct on the MTL. I disclose it in my group description. But I also don’t really trust random jumbled up letters and numbers with four messages that much. Do they actually know Japanese? Who knows. And the MTL is also a major factor in why my group name is what it is.

 

[HYBRID_BEING]

"A message for me!?" -> "And younger than me!?"

I'd say "And even me!?" would be better (cause she uses "yori").

But I also don’t really trust random jumbled up letters and numbers with four messages that much. Do they actually know Japanese? Who knows.

Well, the lines they suggested work better in context, at the very least.