Tenisaki wa Kusushi ga Sukunai Sekaideshita - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

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Is this chapter like, not cleaned on purpose or something? Looks weird compared to how most trap-scans chaps usually are.
 
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Is this chapter like, not cleaned on purpose or something? Looks weird compared to how most trap-scans chaps usually are.
I was going to say that this chapter feels way less polished compared to other scans i've seen from this group. I'm not sure what happened? the cleaning is rough and so is the ts :/
 
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People who say, "I had no choice," always had a choice.

Ah, yes, attacking someone is sure to help his case.

"It's unbelievable that real brothers can have such a fallout out like this..."
You've not met many brothers, have you?

She's suddenly sitting so far to the edge of the bed. Almost as if she's making space for one more person...

"I hope I can find someone I love..."
Less a matter of finding someone, and more a matter of falling in love.
 
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I really question some of the word choices and the phrasing of much of the dialog. I don't say this to be mean, but it reads like a 10 y/o wrote the script for the monologue and dialog. There was also some very tiny text boxes scattered throughout the chapter that made reading very difficult, especially since there was little to no redrawing done.
 
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Don't kid yourself. Nobody would donate to your patreon with this garbage.
 

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