Tenohira Sousei-ki - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Cut the rain

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Invading the World All Alone is an unknown masterwork. High hopes here
 
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Eh. You could tell it was MTLed, it was stilted at some points and some of the word choices felt off but it was better that some MTLs I've read and it got better over the chapter. Keep improving and it'll be fine.
As an example the word you tled as game *or contest feels like it should be duel in these contexts
 
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Eh. You could tell it was MTLed, it was stilted at some points and some of the word choices felt off but it was better that some MTLs I've read and it got better over the chapter. Keep improving and it'll be fine.
As an example the word you tled as game *or contest feels like it should be duel in these contexts
Aight I'll update it
 
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I’m pretty sure the baby is just going "Bu" as a baby sound effect
 
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Anyways thanks so much for the tl. The lettering is rlly nice, better than some official stuff I’ve bought
 

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