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"This is just a little something for what everyone has done to me"
Not sure if this is intentional or a translation error, it comes across as Kagura considers the things everyone has done for her as something that they have afflicted to her (rather than something done for her sake). It adds a minuscule detail but I like it. Hope when her motives are revealed it doesn't go against this.
Hair down Mia is really beautiful, I wish that's the default but it really clashes with her childish and silly personality. As much as it hurts to say it, Mia is better off with the pig tails until she change in to a more mature personality (which I hope never happens).
Gosh darn it that credit page makes me want to sing Baka-mitaigami
Dame da ne dame yo dame na no yo
Anta ga suki de sukisugite
Dore dake tsuyoi osake demo
Yugamanai omoide ga baka-mitaigami
Edit: Grammar corrections