Tensei Mae wa Otoko Datta no de Gyaku Harem wa Okotowari Shite Orimasu - Vol. 2 Ch. 10

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Yay it's back! Thanks for the translation.

I never expect that an uptight girl's school like theirs would be an active breeding ground for fujoshis.
 
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YURIFICATION!
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ty for translation, sophie harem +1 lol
(nikol should be nicole tho)


also chist in novel version clearly and heavily upset than the manga, because she's unknowingly care for sophie more than she realize, I'm a little disappointed that manga version made this scene very mild lol
 

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Public service proofreading :win:

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Pg.5 "thought" → "though" (also consider changing to "..in the same way as Christina", no "does")
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Pg.9 "wate,r" → "water,"
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Pg.12 "They find it difficult on how to talk to you" is a prepositional error, "on" shouldn't be used like this. A very natural-sounding localization in this conversation would be "they're not sure how to talk to you", but that doesn't convey that it's something they're struggling with.

Alternative suggestion if you have enough space:

"They have a hard time figuring out how to talk to you"

Or if you want to use less space :

"They struggle with how to talk to you"

This last one doesn't sound very natural, but it conveys the full extent of it
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Pg. 14 "blonde" → "blond"

Males are described as "blond", females are described as "blonde". This is because it's a French word.
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Pg. 15 "comfusing" → "confusing"
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Pg. 16 "lfie" → "life"
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Pg. 25 "plutonic" → "platonic"

Plutonic is a word, but it's a technical term that has to do with geology
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Pg. 28 "...always puts his country [first]"
 
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There is no escape from the fujoshi :kek:
(lol pg 08, Sophie is cute all is forgiven, cute is justice mindset):meguusmug:
 

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