it seems like they removed the chapters and reuploaded them as smaller chapters, why the fuck u even dothis, it was 1.3-1.5 before in 1 chapter before and now its split up
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Some slip up with sentence being one pace too early,
The scene with the lizard man and the salute, they also say the salute and the sentence with "Is the salute with the hand over the heart" is the mc's thought and belongs after the double salute sentence.
The scene with alice knocking there should be written "...!" and in the next scene cut the mc's first thought should be: "Who's there?"