Page 3 typo with "hundred".
Page 4, at the bottom. When you ask a question, you end the sentence with a question mark, not a dot.
Page 16, sleeping "bag", not bad.
Page 18, in the middle, "No matter how I look at it, it does seem like it..."
In another dimension, another time and space,
a parallel universe is fallin’ on it’s face.
When out of the chaos, who else could it be,
but the animal adventurers from S.-P.-A.-C.-E.
Anyway, seems like Senkawa probably died in the alternate timeline.