The bad narrative is degrading the story. The author use the most nonsense reason for them to go to the movies. When doing that you break the immersion. Some scenes seems cringe too-again breaking the immersion. The 4th chapter seems rushed then going to the cinema cuz there was not enough time displayed for they to bond. As well as she forcing herself to like the girl-there is no solid base for that. I don't see it as a hard thing to do. Probably the editor is at fault for not noticing that or being responsible for that. He could say it was a homework going to the movies but he choose for the girl to reason herself with nonsense. I think the fotography is at fault as well as most of the panels seems to fail at perspective. It seems a great story with failed attempt to keep its potential.