The Creator is on Hiatus

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Even though I find this story to be good, I have found that I really really fucking hate it when the stronger guy acts like a scared bitch and always cowers
weak guy cowering and progressing feels fine, strong guy fighting confidently feels fine too, but strong guy who after knowing he's strong still acts like a pussy feels so fucking annoying..............
 
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It's alright. I would rate it closer to below average. If you have nothing else to do it might be a good manga, but even though I enjoy reading so much trash this one just couldn't keep me excited past the first few chapters. Maybe it's because they keep introducing characters without letting us learn anything about them? Maybe the characters are just unlikable? Maybe it's because it feels like nothing in the story matters? I'm not sure.
 
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There hasn't been a great amount of tension given how the main character came to be able to overpower most enemies so quickly. Still, its changed up the formula enough to keep me interested.

At chapter 45, I would like to see the main run into some problems he cant just plow through. Some greater attachment to his allies would be nice as well.

And more ant waifu.
 
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Follows the Goku formula on the literal fashion. Be losing then suddenly power up. The story was interesting before it became god of the universe.

Would have been better if he empowered his believers more rather than just being One Punch man in every scene. Totally wasted. He used his power to enhance lightning girl and then it was just completely worthless writing later.

All of a sudden characters just fell off and had nothing to do with the overall story. The author may have been rushed to complete this work as the ending was disappointing.

Conclusion, starts off interesting, then power creeps to hell and Goku formula fights. Sad
 
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The main idea of The Creator is on Hiatus is interesting, I’ll give you that, but there are several aspects that make the plot frustrating. One of them is the excessive use of plot armor for the MC. For example, he starts to fight a god, and suddenly begins to surpass it in strength and power, even though just moments earlier he was struggling to even land a hit. This abrupt development harms the immersion and makes the character’s growth feel unconvincing.

Moreover, the story suffers from a lack of continuity. Many ideas and elements are introduced but are quickly abandoned without explanation. One example is the Gods' store from the game on his phone, which initially seemed to contain many powers, but later, the protagonist buys only a few, and the store is never mentioned again. Another frustrating aspect is the character who is introduced as "the savior of humanity" and the one capable of defeating the god of destruction, but this concept is simply discarded without any explanation.

Additionally, there's the subplot about the director's wife, who is in a deep coma. The protagonist offers to try and cure her, but this storyline also disappears without conclusion. It's a clear example of bad writing, where important elements are introduced but later forgotten without any resolution, leaving the audience dissatisfied.

These issues with cohesion and development make the work less engaging and hinder the full enjoyment of an idea that had great potential.
 

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