story's not bad ! her fear and hatred seem very realistically portrayed, while staying optimistic. i just hope she doesn't end up with the prince-- even if its not the same prince who betrayed her (because hes still a child n didnt do it yet), it was still the prince who hurt her and refused to believe her when she needed him.... that shit Sucks man. If the prince turns out to be the ML, that would just feel bad... I'd drop it so fast.
It seems to be implied thats the direction it's going.... but I hope its not............