The Day I Decided to Make My Cheeky Gyaru Sister Understand in My Own Way - Ch. 5 - Making my cheeky gal sister understand christmas

[Eighty-six]

The author indeed drew the sleep molestation version, but it was only one chapter and they stopped before starting this version. This version started with a gangrape and the author wrote few chapters. It was after they released The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out that people started complaining about the lack of rape tag. So in their hurried attempt to avoid getting flagged and deleted by Pixiv, the author said that the sister is actually a slut so it's not rape, despite what they themself drew and wrote in Day 1, Day 2, and The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out.

Is "The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out" the one that depicts what happened during that mixer she went to? Never mind, you were referring to chapter 4 without calling it "Day 3".

I'm disinclined to read porn, but capitulations of the contents of that Fanbox entry depicted her as markedly enthusiastic-- beyond any reasonable need for the mangaka to spell out that detail.

 

[jhs_reika]

Is "The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out" the one that depicts what happened during that mixer she went to? Because I'm disinclined to read porn, but capitulations of the contents of that Fanbox entry depicted her as markedly enthusiastic-- beyond any reasonable need for the author to spell out that detail.

No, "The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out" is the title of chapter 4 here in MangaDex.

Too bad that you don't read porn, thus cannot clarify the truth yourself. About the "enthusiasm" that some people insisted around, it was shown ONLY while she was highly intoxicated and after the boys "forced" her (using peer pressure and said that she had to do these things before she can go) to ride multiple boys and make them cum (at one moment one boy held her arms and placed her on top another boy to ride him) for some time. It's a typical hentai plot, where the female fell into depravity after getting exposed to prolonged pleasure of the flesh. And she was highly intoxicated too.

"Slut" that author said is only applicable in limited meaning that she have a slutty body that's highly responsive to sexual acts. That's the "enthusiasm" that some people in the comment insisted on. Those people disregard everything else, including the obvious reluctance and dislike the girl showed of being used as a whore whenever she's sober and even at the start of chapter 1's gangrape. Those people said that getting peer pressured to have sex wouldn't count as rape. That if the female likes the sex then it's not rape, even if the female is highly intoxicated (like drugged or drunk).

Edit: Sorry, I made a mistake. The author continued the sleep-molestion version. There was a Day 2 there. Also I want to add more detail about the "enthusiasm." Her slutty enthusiasm (saying "more" and what not) was shown only in single, last panel. After everything happened.

 

[motheblackcat]

Too late author! heh... haaa...

 

[Decyphrs]

No, "The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out" is the title of chapter 4 here in MangaDex.

Too bad that you don't read porn, thus cannot clarify the truth yourself. About the "enthusiasm" that some people insisted around, it was shown ONLY while she was highly intoxicated and after the boys "forced" her (using peer pressure and said that she had to do these things before she can go) to ride multiple boys and make them cum (at one moment one boy held her arms and placed her on top another boy to ride him) for some time. It's a typical hentai plot, where the female fell into depravity after getting exposed to prolonged pleasure of the flesh. And she was highly intoxicated too.

"Slut" that author said is only applicable in limited meaning that she have a slutty body that's highly responsive to sexual acts. That's the "enthusiasm" that some people in the comment insisted on. Those people disregard everything else, including the obvious reluctance and dislike the girl showed of being used as a whore whenever she's sober and even at the start of chapter 1's gangrape. Those people said that getting peer pressured to have sex wouldn't count as rape. That if the female likes the sex then it's not rape, even if the female is highly intoxicated (like drugged or drunk).

Edit: Sorry, I made a mistake. The author continued the sleep-molestion version. There was a Day 2 there. Also I want to add more detail about the "enthusiasm." Her slutty enthusiasm (saying "more" and what not) was shown only in single, last panel. After everything happened.

My brain committed suicide when reading this thread bro. People really tryna justify gang-rape with “did the men give consent?” when the fact that “the sister was totally drunkenly forced into it and that she can’t give consent” is brought up. Like, Jesus Christ, arguing at all that it wasn’t rape is so fucking bizarre to me.

 

[jhs_reika]

My brain committed suicide when reading this thread bro. People really tryna justify gang-rape with “did the men give consent?” when the fact that “the sister was totally drunkenly forced into it and that she can’t give consent” is brought up. Like, Jesus Christ, arguing at all that it wasn’t rape is so fucking bizarre to me.

I agree. It's to such extend that I wonder if there are some among those people who did the same thing as in this manga and they were just trying really hard to justify their crime.

 

[Kierlak]

My brain committed suicide when reading this thread bro. People really tryna justify gang-rape with “did the men give consent?” when the fact that “the sister was totally drunkenly forced into it and that she can’t give consent” is brought up. Like, Jesus Christ, arguing at all that it wasn’t rape is so fucking bizarre to me.

I agree. Women are retarded and can't consent to anything.

 

[Litreara]

This is a Pixiv comic-- what's she getting an editor for?

Do you think this is a well-written story with well-written characters? I don't think it is. One of the many ways to better write plot and characters is to have an editor to help you. My point is that the author could make an effort to do better writing because the art is good.

 

[Decyphrs]

I agree. Women are retarded and can't consent to anything.

Is this /s? The fuck does this even mean? If you’re blackout drunk you absolutely can’t give consent. This has nothing to do with being retarded.

 

[Kierlak]

Is this /s? The fuck does this even mean? If you’re blackout drunk you absolutely can’t give consent. This has nothing to do with being retarded.

She wasn't blackout drunk. She wasn't held there against her will. She wasn't forced to drink. She wasn't forced to stay. She wasn't forced to pounce on multiple dicks like a starving dog.

She wasn't raped. She IS a whore.

 

[gasnomercante]

Cheeky sister needs a big load of eggnog

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

It wouldn't create such controversy if few stubborn people didn't try to force their opinion without actually reading and understanding the source. They blatantly ignored drawn expressions and written texts, and just said whatever they wanted to be the truth while rejecting other's explanations.

I know exactly what you mean. There are whole pages of her participating enthusiastically, begging for more, telling the world how good it feels, after she's had every single chance to just say "no" and walk away, and somehow we've got people like "Is this rape?"

the author said that the sister is actually a slut so it's not rape, despite what they themself drew and wrote in Day 1, Day 2, and The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out.

Right, so the author doesn't know the character's motivations, or their states of mind/drunkenness.

I'm disinclined to read porn, but capitulations of the contents of that Fanbox entry depicted her as markedly enthusiastic-- beyond any reasonable need for the mangaka to spell out that detail.

To the extent that if I had gotten Me2'd under those circumstances, and we happened to have a recording of the gangbang, my lawyer would play it, then immediately rest his case.

It's a typical hentai plot, where the female fell into depravity after getting exposed to prolonged pleasure of the flesh. And she was highly intoxicated too.

No, it was right from the start. There was no "prolonged pleasure of the flesh". We literally caught the beginning of it all, and she was enthusiastic. Remember?

"Slut" that author said is only applicable in limited meaning that she have a slutty body that's highly responsive to sexual acts.

That's not what クソビッチ means. You just don't speak Japanese, and you're lying.

Sorry, I made a mistake. The author continued the sleep-molestion version.

Where?

Also I want to add more detail about the "enthusiasm." Her slutty enthusiasm (saying "more" and what not) was shown only in single, last panel. After everything happened.

No. It was shown at the start, when she was grinding her hips on the dude. Remember? Nobody was holding her hips down, moving them back and forth. The guy beneath her was entirely hands-off, telling us how she's doing this all on her own. Then the next line, on the next page, was noting that she really enjoyed grinding her hips on him, and asked if it felt good. Then finally on the third page, they finally ran out of patience with her teasing and finally stuck it in.

 

[alterwassolldasbitte]

I feel like this is gonna go an incest route. I hope not, but you never know

When will they drop the "not related by blood" thing? About chapter 10?

 

[Naian]

I come across the fanbox version first, where the sister got gangbanged, it's only later I found there was an official version. The one I read had dubious translation, the only thing I got from it is the sister being easily manipulated into sex, despite being visibly awkward around the guys, and ended up enjoying it. The brother got briefly mentioned.

When I started reading the chapters here, the title stood out: "The day I decided to make my cheeky gyaru sister understand in my own way". And then I read Day 0, the title immediately sounded ominous. We had the sister being incredibly rude toward the brother. The brother himself described her as "shitty gal", so this read like he looked down on her. He then said "You're gonna pay for this someday", I can only read this a threat and I linked the NSFW chapter to this, thinking to my self, "did the brother hired to scumbags to fuck/rape her?". And the final bubble says "I decided to gradually make her 'understand' in my own way", from what I know so far, this seemed like the brother is going to fuck up sister's life. At least, this is what the impression I got.

Next chapter, the SFW Day 1, it went the same way as the NSFW ver until the fade out, there was no sex scene but the sister returned somehow back at home, and collapsed on the entry way. We got a glimpse of the brother, and his eyes was drawn in a different way from the sister's, it looked menacing (eyes with vertical lines all over). Considering Day 0, I feel more convinced the brother is a terrible person out to destroy his sister. But next page his eyes were drawn normally, the brother even give her a bottle water, showing he "cared" about her. But to me, so far, he is just putting a mask, like a manipulative guy. At any rate, the chapter ends with the girl seemingly touched by the gesture.

Chapter 3, "Day 2" so I assume it continued just after the sister got back home drunk. Sister got sick and is bedridden. We found the reason the sister being rebellious, she found out she's adopted and I assume she felt alienated from her own family. Since she wasn't blood related, there was no reason for the brother to care for her. But the brother disagreed and affirmed they are family. In fact he even brought some gruel their mother prepared for the sick daughter. The thing that is interesting, is once again the brother's eyes were drawn in a menacing way. In p5, when the brother made to move away, the sister grabbed on his tshirt, and the brother just looked at her silently. Next panel, the girl looked worried/scared, the panel is darkening, as if something bad is going to happen, and she let go the tshirt. The opposite happened, the brother was glad his sister accepted to eat the food, and even joked.

Chapter 4, the title is now "The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out". No idea when is this, at least few days after last chapter, enough time so the girl got healed. We've got the POV of a scumbag dude, he instantly made a sexual innuendo of being backed up since it's been for some time the girl last met with him, basically calling her a cumdumpster. He even described her as weak to pressuring in his thoughts, and I assume he was mocking her with "What a poor girl", since he had no problem exploiting her. This gives the feeling that the girl had already many sexual encounter with guys, Day 1 fanbox isn't the girl's first rodeo, there was no mention of hymen broken or blood. Next pages affirmed the idea, she's on her knees while the guy was standing over her, she got some fluid around her mouth. She got a message from her brother while the scumbag take a piss (conveniently). She got emotional over texting her brother, perhaps realizing she didn't like the way she lived her life lately, she regretted being so loose with herself. That's when she decided to stop, and she denied the scumbag's plan for another gangbang, and she returned home.

Before next chapter got released, I read a better translation of NSFW Day 1. One thing that wasn't clear before, but the sister's friend actually deceived her to come to a party with the scumbags. What a crappy "friend".

Another NSFW got released, during chapter 2 it seems. She dreamed of her brother molesting her and she got aroused by it. She's not beating the slut allegation for sure.

Chapter 5, "Making my cheeky gal sister understand christmas", some time had passed from last chapter. The siblings got along now, the sister stopped rejected her adopted family, she even got worried about her mother overworking. She felt down wearing the Santa cosplay, due to her past behavior I assume. The brother just called her cute and she got a tsundere moment. The brother's eyes were still scratchy drawn, but it doesn't have the ominous feeling from before though.

There's an untranslated NSFW chapter of the brother I think, where he is molesting his sister in her sleep. The brother got the typical Hprotagonist look.

Anyhow, that's how I read this whole thing so far. Sister found she's adopted, she decided to rebel, meet people and have sex, regret doing since her family keeps being supportive, and tries to be "normal" again. And she may or may not have unholy thought about her brother.

 

[jhs_reika]

I know exactly what you mean. There are whole pages of her participating enthusiastically, begging for more, telling the world how good it feels, after she's had every single chance to just say "no" and walk away, and somehow we've got people like "Is this rape?"

Right, so the author doesn't know the character's motivations, or their states of mind/drunkenness.

To the extent that if I had gotten Me2'd under those circumstances, and we happened to have a recording of the gangbang, my lawyer would play it, then immediately rest his case.

No, it was right from the start. There was no "prolonged pleasure of the flesh". We literally caught the beginning of it all, and she was enthusiastic. Remember?

That's not what クソビッチ means. You just don't speak Japanese, and you're lying.

Where?

No. It was shown at the start, when she was grinding her hips on the dude. Remember? Nobody was holding her hips down, moving them back and forth. The guy beneath her was entirely hands-off, telling us how she's doing this all on her own. Then the next line, on the next page, was noting that she really enjoyed grinding her hips on him, and asked if it felt good. Then finally on the third page, they finally ran out of patience with her teasing and finally stuck it in.

No you don't know what I meant. You couldn't have.

You just see things that's pandering onto your personal sense of value while ignoring the others. How else would you see something that's not there and remember things that never happened, while ignoring things that's actually there? And by seeing how you stalked this thread, replied to as many people as you can (even those who were not talking to you), just to then force-feed them your take of the story? That explains things about you.

You're a bully type. You're a type of person who don't understand and don't care about the point of view of shy people, introverts, timid people, and have-nots. For you who said peer pressured to have sex is not rape: if someone didn't keep refusing clearly and strongly upfront against someone's "strongly assertive persuasion/invitation" then that means they're ALRIGHT with it. If that happens again, then it's even more: that means they ABSOLUTELY HAVE NO PROBLEM with it. They no longer have any right to say that they were actually forced and didn't actually want to do it. It's clear with how you ignored the emotion of the awkward-in-group and weak-against-pressure girl in this story.

So like what I said before, I already too tired to explain anything about the story to you anymore. Though by being so quick to say that I'm lying without really reading and understanding what I wrote said another thing about your personality.

As for me, it'd better if everyone read the source and evaluate it themselves.

 

[Eighty-six]

My brain committed suicide when reading this thread bro. People really tryna justify gang-rape with “did the men give consent?” when the fact that “the sister was totally drunkenly forced into it and that she can’t give consent” is brought up. Like, Jesus Christ, arguing at all that it wasn’t rape is so fucking bizarre to me.

Too bad that you don't read porn, thus cannot clarify the truth yourself. About the "enthusiasm" that some people insisted around, it was shown ONLY while she was highly intoxicated and after the boys "forced" her (using peer pressure and said that she had to do these things before she can go) to ride multiple boys and make them cum (at one moment one boy held her arms and placed her on top another boy to ride him) for some time. It's a typical hentai plot, where the female fell into depravity after getting exposed to prolonged pleasure of the flesh. And she was highly intoxicated too.

How intoxicated is "highly intoxicated"? Rape occurs either at coercion (e.g. by weapon or blackmail), or because the victim is unable to give or retract consent (e.g. they're mentally disabled, unconscious, or asleep).

There's a difference between "drunk" and "black-out drunk" (or at least "hardly ambulatory and slurring words"-- it's at this point that any sex is rape by default), and we still hold drunk people responsible for their actions (such as choosing to drive while drunk) so it's not as if most anyone (much less the law) thinks that you're incapable of making decisions only because you chose to impair your judgment capacities. I'm not saying that it's impossible to rape a drunk person, just that the bar for "drunk enough" is "borderline unconscious".

In regards to coercion, it doesn't sound like they did or threatened to either harm her or physically restrain her. Rather, it sounds like she has a supremely weak will-- which is unfortunate, but isn't anybody else's responsibility if she's an adult without a mental disability. Calling that coercion is almost like calling it coercion when someone asks the same person out repeatedly and they choose to accept after the fifth attempt while still willingly associating with them in the meantime.

Do you think this is a well-written story with well-written characters? I don't think it is. One of the many ways to better write plot and characters is to have an editor to help you.

But you're saying that the mangaka should do this... for a Pixiv comic. A Pixiv comic where chapters are anywhere from one to five pages, at that.

 

[jhs_reika]

I come across the fanbox version first, where the sister got gangbanged, it's only later I found there was an official version. The one I read had dubious translation, the only thing I got from it is the sister being easily manipulated into sex, despite being visibly awkward around the guys, and ended up enjoying it. The brother got briefly mentioned.

When I started reading the chapters here, the title stood out: "The day I decided to make my cheeky gyaru sister understand in my own way". And then I read Day 0, the title immediately sounded ominous. We had the sister being incredibly rude toward the brother. The brother himself described her as "shitty gal", so this read like he looked down on her. He then said "You're gonna pay for this someday", I can only read this a threat and I linked the NSFW chapter to this, thinking to my self, "did the brother hired to scumbags to fuck/rape her?". And the final bubble says "I decided to gradually make her 'understand' in my own way", from what I know so far, this seemed like the brother is going to fuck up sister's life. At least, this is what the impression I got.

Next chapter, the SFW Day 1, it went the same way as the NSFW ver until the fade out, there was no sex scene but the sister returned somehow back at home, and collapsed on the entry way. We got a glimpse of the brother, and his eyes was drawn in a different way from the sister's, it looked menacing (eyes with vertical lines all over). Considering Day 0, I feel more convinced the brother is a terrible person out to destroy his sister. But next page his eyes were drawn normally, the brother even give her a bottle water, showing he "cared" about her. But to me, so far, he is just putting a mask, like a manipulative guy. At any rate, the chapter ends with the girl seemingly touched by the gesture.

Chapter 3, "Day 2" so I assume it continued just after the sister got back home drunk. Sister got sick and is bedridden. We found the reason the sister being rebellious, she found out she's adopted and I assume she felt alienated from her own family. Since she wasn't blood related, there was no reason for the brother to care for her. But the brother disagreed and affirmed they are family. In fact he even brought some gruel their mother prepared for the sick daughter. The thing that is interesting, is once again the brother's eyes were drawn in a menacing way. In p5, when the brother made to move away, the sister grabbed on his tshirt, and the brother just looked at her silently. Next panel, the girl looked worried/scared, the panel is darkening, as if something bad is going to happen, and she let go the tshirt. The opposite happened, the brother was glad his sister accepted to eat the food, and even joked.

Chapter 4, the title is now "The Day My Gal Sister Stepped Out". No idea when is this, at least few days after last chapter, enough time so the girl got healed. We've got the POV of a scumbag dude, he instantly made a sexual innuendo of being backed up since it's been for some time the girl last met with him, basically calling her a cumdumpster. He even described her as weak to pressuring in his thoughts, and I assume he was mocking her with "What a poor girl", since he had no problem exploiting her. This gives the feeling that the girl had already many sexual encounter with guys, Day 1 fanbox isn't the girl's first rodeo, there was no mention of hymen broken or blood. Next pages affirmed the idea, she's on her knees while the guy was standing over her, she got some fluid around her mouth. She got a message from her brother while the scumbag take a piss (conveniently). She got emotional over texting her brother, perhaps realizing she didn't like the way she lived her life lately, she regretted being so loose with herself. That's when she decided to stop, and she denied the scumbag's plan for another gangbang, and she returned home.

Before next chapter got released, I read a better translation of NSFW Day 1. One thing that wasn't clear before, but the sister's friend actually deceived her to come to a party with the scumbags. What a crappy "friend".

Another NSFW got released, during chapter 2 it seems. She dreamed of her brother molesting her and she got aroused by it. She's not beating the slut allegation for sure.

Chapter 5, "Making my cheeky gal sister understand christmas", some time had passed from last chapter. The siblings got along now, the sister stopped rejected her adopted family, she even got worried about her mother overworking. She felt down wearing the Santa cosplay, due to her past behavior I assume. The brother just called her cute and she got a tsundere moment. The brother's eyes were still scratchy drawn, but it doesn't have the ominous feeling from before though.

There's an untranslated NSFW chapter of the brother I think, where he is molesting his sister in her sleep. The brother got the typical Hprotagonist look.

Anyhow, that's how I read this whole thing so far. Sister found she's adopted, she decided to rebel, meet people and have sex, regret doing since her family keeps being supportive, and tries to be "normal" again. And she may or may not have unholy thought about her brother.

That's an interesting take. I didn't think of the dark possibility of the brother being a manipulative a*shole. And you actually looked at the more details of the MC's expressions. About the NSFW that you said maybe happened during chapter 2, I think it's actually the continuation (a "Day 2") of the untranslated NSFW chapter of the brother molesting the sister in her sleep (the author said the sleep-molestation chapter is an alternate version, a different "Day 1" from the version here in MangaDex). Otherwise the flow would be weird, looking at the sister's emotion just a day after the gangrape.

 

[jhs_reika]

How intoxicated is "highly intoxicated"? Rape occurs either at coercion (e.g. by weapon or blackmail), or because the victim is unable to give or retract consent (e.g. they're mentally disabled, unconscious, or asleep).

There's a difference between "drunk" and "black-out drunk" (or at least "hardly ambulatory and slurring words"-- it's at this point that any sex is rape by default), and we still hold drunk people responsible for their actions (such as choosing to drive while drunk) so it's not as if most anyone (much less the law) thinks that you're incapable of making decisions only because you chose to impair your judgment capacities. I'm not saying that it's impossible to rape a drunk person.

It's more like a "hardly ambulatory and slurring words" drunk. She wasn't unconscious or asleep, but she had droopy eyes, looking weak, and mumbling. She stopped mumbling and ended up voicing her pleasure loudly at the end though, because hentai logic.

About her drunkenness being voluntary intoxication (if you disregard her being peer pressured), she can still claim rape if she wanted to because she was quite mentally-impaired when the gangr*pe started.

It's hard to apply RL logic into hentai. For example, in hentai NTR can easily happen because in hentai females can't avoid ending up acting like a b*tch while being raped just because the pleasure is too good.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

The brother himself described her as "shitty gal",

I know you're just sharing your impressions at the time, but I can't stress enough that she was described as a "dirty slut".

There's an untranslated NSFW chapter of the brother I think, where he is molesting his sister in her sleep. The brother got the typical Hprotagonist look.

That's the original canon that got dropped, since it involved incest and "non-consensual activities", which are apparently against Pixiv TOS.

No you don't know what I meant. You couldn't have.

I do. For these past few days, I've had a band of deficient morons look at the page, see her stay at a drinking party with men that have already fucked her before, drink of her own free will, do all sorts of complicated sex stuff without any prompting from the guys, from grinding her hips without anyone touching, or moving, her, to telling them how much she loves it, to jerking off a second guy without his intervention, to begging for more, then, after a few chapters, coming back for seconds, entirely sober. The men kept commenting about how this is all coming from her, and how they actually just want to put it in, yet somehow said morons are left with the impression that they're pressuring her to do any of this.

As if that's not bad enough, they ignore the author's own words and intent, the title of the chapter, and the fact that the sites she's posting to specifically take down non-consensual sexual activities as a violation of TOS, which was what forced her to move the story away from sleep molestation incest netori to its current form in the first place.

And all this because they seem to believe that FMC is a child that's too stupid to know what's going on, has literally no free will, and is thus physically incapable of consenting to literally anything despite going through every single effort to consent to every single thing that's happened to her, entirely free of coercion.

Their grand argument?: "Well, they... they-... asked her to drink at the drinking party. And she did it immediately. And did you not see that one transition to a flash forward? It was black. The guys didn't get the black transition. If the author wanted us to know the guys were also blackout drunk, she would have drawn the same page four times, but from the perspective of every person in the party so we know everyone else is blackout drunk too!"

I think it's actually the continuation (a "Day 2") of the untranslated NSFW chapter of the brother molesting the sister in her sleep (the author said the sleep-molestation chapter is an alternate version, a different "Day 1" from the version here in MangaDex).

It's literally an entirely different canon. The sleep molestation was against TOS for being incest and non-consensual. The title for this one is literally "In a dream". Your willful ignorance of the entire situation behind the reboot of the story, the literal words and intent of the author, and the title of the chapters (Which are prominently visible on this very website) is no excuse. Nobody is being raped or molested; that would get the author banned off the platforms again.

She wasn't unconscious or asleep, but she had droopy eyes, looking weak, and mumbling. She stopped mumbling and ended up voicing her pleasure loudly at the end though, because hentai logic.

She wasn't mumbling at all, and her eyes weren't drooping. She was savoring the dick she was riding on, and speaking clearly, and coherently. Japanese has ways to convey mumbling and slurring. None of them were used here.

About her drunkenness being voluntary intoxication (if you disregard her being peer pressured), she can still claim rape if she wanted to because she was quite mentally-impaired when the gangr*pe started.

They're ALL mentally impaired, she did all of this voluntarily, and we still hold her accountable for her actions. She is a grown adult with agency.

It's hard to apply RL logic into hentai.

As it stands, it would be an improvement if you did, since this is supposed to be a relatively grounded story.

 

[Hicleric]

Intentionally skipped this yesterday since I didn't want to spoil Christmas.

Read through today, and surprised by how good this chapter felt. It's an actual story now with signs of flesh on the characters and growth. This is more along the lines of what I was hoping to read when the first chapter dropped.

I've befriended women who were/are sex workers (it's a broad category, maybe do some objectively-sourced reading about it) and therefore (usually) highly promiscuous, and I can unequivocally state they are just as human as the rest of us, both bad and good. What/who someone does behind closed doors is completely irrelevant to how they treat other people...and here I see a girl who is starting to realize she can be a better person.

More of this, less of the Fanbox kerfluffle please

 

[Naian]

I know you're just sharing your impressions at the time, but I can't stress enough that she was described as a "dirty slut".

In that case, it seems to me it implies the brother knew his sister is getting action even prior to Day 0, why else would he employ precisely "dirty slut".

That's the original canon that got dropped, since it involved incest and "non-consensual activities", which are apparently against Pixiv TOS.

On NSFW Day 1 the guys were joking about the step brother getting aroused by her, I wonder if that is author's way to nod on the "scrapped" chapter.