The Demon King Levels Up - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

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Still very generic so far. I wish it went into more details about the memories of the demon king - his goals, accomplishments, and power. I also wish he had more of the demon king's personality. Without that, the fact that he inherited the demon king's memories feels purely like a plot device to make the mc more knowledgeable and powerful without putting in any effort, but that's been pretty much everything that has happened up to this point. If the mc had some goals or greater motivations I could get behind him, but at this point it just seems like some shallow power fantasy. Powerful characters are fine if they are done well, but watching them steamroll everything just to get exponentially more powerful for no other reason than to keep steamrolling is boring as hell. I hope there's some substance soon.
 

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