Dex-chan lover
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- Nov 18, 2019
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I thought her character was too shallow... like how did protagonist and blue like her immediately.
it's ooc for blue. she would've done something to silence her, even though she didn't reveal her true form, he still won't associate with her
it's a little abrupt for red too. at least some dialogue like, "poor girl" or more monologue about how he feels responsible for her. even if he's a numbskull, it's that exact reason that makes his character...
the girl's death was too graceful, it's odd that she's been calm until she saw her father death and the incident with the debtors. freak the freak out hb. how's she calm being with exploding girls
it's ooc for blue. she would've done something to silence her, even though she didn't reveal her true form, he still won't associate with her
it's a little abrupt for red too. at least some dialogue like, "poor girl" or more monologue about how he feels responsible for her. even if he's a numbskull, it's that exact reason that makes his character...
the girl's death was too graceful, it's odd that she's been calm until she saw her father death and the incident with the debtors. freak the freak out hb. how's she calm being with exploding girls