The Fallen Saint Dances in Vortex of War - Ch. 2

[MangaDex]

 

[Saikeno]

Prepare to get Fk by the person that 1v1 your boss.

 

[BalrogDeMorgoth]

So it's basically a romcom with a Chunni wannabe-revenge protag? Points for uniqueness.

 

[exxeld]

What the chances the fake saint was instigating all this to happen

 

[pandatime]

Bro is flabbergastered but probaly liking it anyways. Alicia is hella bitter thou which understandable but holay even the demons are been freakedout lmao

 

[cryum]

Im half expecting the orc guy to lose on purpose

 

[MoneyLoss]

Thank you for the update and translation

 

[yoshiii]

Oh more revenge plots. Hope this isn't one of those cop outs where the protagonist is healed by the demon king's kindness and forgoes her revenge. No benevolence, that shit is whack.

 

[larcek]

the fact the human country just ignored the saint having sealed away the demon king. what did they expect to happen when the saint was killed, huh? i do hope for a moderate revenge plot, starting with some self-destruction happening in that human country, followed up by the witch doing her bidding.

 

[GreC_89]

Thank you for your hard work LeFredy-san.

 

[Vmpslushie]

If they gave her lewd crest crest of subordination, they shouldn't need to worry about her betraying them though.

 

[cockerblocker2000]

thank u for ur hard work the translation was great and highly enjoyable. i’m excited for the next chapter. <3

 

[Dickmaboy]

The translation is pretty good for an MTL I hope you continue this

 

[Doodert]

Thank you for the chapter!

There were only a few things that stood out that a second or third reread would help to fix.. a missing letter, some tense issues, or having/adding/needing S's here and there.

But like others have said, this was pretty damn readable for MTL, so thank you for your effort and work on this!

 

[LeFredy]

Thank you for the chapter!

There were only a few things that stood out that a second or third reread would help to fix.. a missing letter, some tense issues, or having/adding/needing S's here and there.

But like others have said, this was pretty damn readable for MTL, so thank you for your effort and work on this!

You're welcome! I'm happy that you enjoyed it.

As I said in the credit page, english isn't my main language (I speak french normally) and because of that I have a tend to do a lot of errors. Furthermore, I wasn't paying much attention to grammar for this chapter. I was more focussed on trying to build sentences that made sense out of mtl. For the next chapters, I will pass the translation trough a corrector online or something like that to filter these mistakes a little bit.
That being said, if you're interressed in doing a review on the translation before I typeset the whole thing, you're free to contact me on discord! (it would be greatly appreciated)

 

[Chizan]

the fact the human country just ignored the saint having sealed away the demon king. what did they expect to happen when the saint was killed, huh? i do hope for a moderate revenge plot, starting with some self-destruction happening in that human country, followed up by the witch doing her bidding.

Nah, this chapter pointed out the human kingdom 'killed all the people she cared for' (page 13). Until that point I too was on the more lenient side. But now, she needs to exact Raoul-level vengeance for the scales to balance...