lol bro im half way in it rn, lookin forward to see yours
Well I'm that type of shiet who may get call out 'go get a job' lol(cuz I'm literally jobless atm)
Thanks for the feedback, will try a new font for next ch.Please use a different font next time, this is a bit painful to read with this font…
They must been paid less lol that's the drawback of hired bladesThe fact our attacker here thought the lady was here against her will but finds out shes not kinda just seems like itnwill backfire no? Like if gonna have someone kidnap someone for you atlrqst make them be 100% on your scummy side lmao
Its even worse when look at tvis guy fucking idolising Aina. Like this is gonna be so bad for the fake hero Holy..They must been paid less lol that's the drawback of hired blades
i too found it ridiculous that he's a fanboy of aina lelIts even worse when look at tvis guy fucking idolising Aina. Like this is gonna be so bad for the fake hero Holy..
They're new charas that will be introduced next ch.who were the 2 at the end?
Dunno seems like this girl quiet blackhearted since she the one who suggest to take that commander daughter hostage.Was that the saintest with the brand on her forehead? Let me guess, enslaved and getting outright raped?
Hell, you can even see her "empty eyes" expression that seems to not give a fuck either at page 4, bottom panelDunno seems like this girl quiet blackhearted since she the one who suggest to take that commander daughter hostage.
I’d also suggest going through your translation another time as there was some wonkiness. Like the part on page 3 where you put “…the knights would repulse” instead of “…the knights would rebel”Thanks for the feedback, will try a new font for next ch.