The Former Hero Wants To Live Peacefully - Ch. 8 - The Hero Stops An Attack

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The fact our attacker here thought the lady was here against her will but finds out shes not kinda just seems like itnwill backfire no? Like if gonna have someone kidnap someone for you atlrqst make them be 100% on your scummy side lmao
 
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The fact our attacker here thought the lady was here against her will but finds out shes not kinda just seems like itnwill backfire no? Like if gonna have someone kidnap someone for you atlrqst make them be 100% on your scummy side lmao
They must been paid less lol that's the drawback of hired blades:kek:
 
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Was that the saintest with the brand on her forehead? Let me guess, enslaved and getting outright raped?
 
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Thanks for the feedback, will try a new font for next ch. :oooo:
I’d also suggest going through your translation another time as there was some wonkiness. Like the part on page 3 where you put “…the knights would repulse” instead of “…the knights would rebel”

Also the “how come” on page 2 should probably be “What?!” As it makes more sense with the line after it
 
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I like this manga but I’m having a hard time keeping up. It introduces like 3+ new characters each chapter.
 

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