The Former Hero Wants To Live Peacefully - Ch. 8 - The Hero Stops An Attack

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Was that the saintest with the brand on her forehead? Let me guess, enslaved and getting outright raped?
She had it back in the first chapter so I'm guessing it's just part of her design, unless she's been enslaved the whole time.
 
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I’d also suggest going through your translation another time as there was some wonkiness. Like the part on page 3 where you put “…the knights would repulse” instead of “…the knights would rebel”

Also the “how come” on page 2 should probably be “What?!” As it makes more sense with the line after it
well i was trying to make him feel like holding his temper... but guess you're right, i don't have a prove reader, gotta make it simpler :wtf:
 
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Thanks for working hard to give us two chapters to a series i thought was dead.
 
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This needs proofreading. This offends proofreaders enough to make me want to proof it…but I’m on a holiday so, no.
 
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She had it back in the first chapter so I'm guessing it's just part of her design, unless she's been enslaved the whole time.
I highly doubt it. If she was enslaved, with such a big and obvious mark, everyone would have mentioned it. The hero would have known. The mage, the goddess, even the citizens, would have realized that, or told the hero. But no one said anything about her being enslaved since the beginning. Even if she was enslaved after she returned, the mage surely would have realized it, or at least the goddess would have known and told the hero.

It's most likely just a part of a saintess's makeup. So the most likely scenario is that she is just a scheming greedy shameless bitch who uses the royal family to boost her power and influence.
 
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I highly doubt it. If she was enslaved, with such a big and obvious mark, everyone would have mentioned it. The hero would have known. The mage, the goddess, even the citizens, would have realized that, or told the hero. But no one said anything about her being enslaved since the beginning. Even if she was enslaved after she returned, the mage surely would have realized it, or at least the goddess would have known and told the hero.

It's most likely just a part of a saintess's makeup. So the most likely scenario is that she is just a scheming greedy shameless bitch who uses the royal family to boost her power and influence.
Either that or she actually bought the lie that the hero was dead and said "fuck it, might as well ruin the kingdom".
 
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I highly doubt it. If she was enslaved, with such a big and obvious mark, everyone would have mentioned it. The hero would have known. The mage, the goddess, even the citizens, would have realized that, or told the hero. But no one said anything about her being enslaved since the beginning. Even if she was enslaved after she returned, the mage surely would have realized it, or at least the goddess would have known and told the hero.

It's most likely just a part of a saintess's makeup. So the most likely scenario is that she is just a scheming greedy shameless bitch who uses the royal family to boost her power and influence.
Same, I doubt her being enslaved the whole time, it probably is just her being a cunt.
Did forget about the Goddess honestly, read so many of these that details blur.

There's the outside chance of it but it's not something that I'd put any sort of money on.
The Goddess did fail to see the backstab coming, after all, even though it was plotted from the start, she only suspected the king of being up to something. She isn't all knowing.
 
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the king has no shady people to send or something? why are they always send someone easy believe in the truth like this?
 
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A "retired" hero's work is never done. Fix the ruined horses houses, tend the fields, cook dinner, defeat the assassins kidnappers, feed the goat. . . Busy, busy, busy.
 
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Damn, the pregnant "Saintess" makes some pretty evil suggestions. She may have been Noel's childhood friend but yeah, the prince can keep her. Fortunately he was never romantically attracted to her anyway. Prince doesn't seem so evil, for now. But we'll probably see his dark side later.

So... who are these two new visitors who just walked in without getting detected? Don't tell me it's the prince and the saintess in disguise or something. That'd be insane.
 

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