The Former Prostitute Became a Rich Wife - Vol. 4 Ch. 28

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Ugh, author's writing has taken a huge nosedive in this kidnapping arc.

You can tell they have no IRL experience with taking care of children and how most basic school security rules work.

And also as the TL rightfully pointed out in the credits page, author wrote FMC to be a moron with her not simply crying out for help in a crowded street.
 
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crying for help in the street would get police invovle, and the guy is still the kid's father and they are not married or anything so the most police would do is keep them there until the mother come.
But yea, that would prevent the situation to escalate like this but then its would not make a story for us to see
 
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crying for help in the street would get police invovle, and the guy is still the kid's father and they are not married or anything so the most police would do is keep them there until the mother come.
But yea, that would prevent the situation to escalate like this but then its would not make a story for us to see
No, Japan does not know shared custody as a concept. Families have custody in Japan, not persons.
Legally, he should have no more rights than a complete stranger.

It's obviously all liberty to create drama and a kidnapping arc, and the conclusion to it by the way isn't bad, but as usual in stories with drama and conflict, there is an easy solution the characters don't take, simply because the writer couldn't write a convincing reason why not.

Could you have written a way?
 
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What does Mr. not-so-right want with the child? What is he thinking of doing with that lighter? Will chansalor Palpatine tell the truth about what side of the force he is on?
 
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Yeah this is all very strange, both in logic and execution. But you know what? I'm still having a good time so I don't really care.

Thanks for the translation.
 
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Fuckin insane, lmao.

Also, did he lock himself in the room with Sora? If the rooms have locks, why didn't Honoka lock herself in with Sora?
 
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I could get behind seeking refuge in her workplace, as stupid as it is, but why tf did they just let the man waltz in and check door to door?
 

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