The Great Mage of the Hero's Party Reincarnates - Ch. 0

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1. Thought the hero was a dude at first
2. Did not expect the other party members to have quirks, made it interesting
This is a good start, I like it
 
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there is literally nothing i hate more than calling something "Chapter 0" and then filling it with all the context necessary for the next chapter to make sense.
if i need to read the chapter before chapter "1" for it to make sense, it's not chapter 1, its chapter 2

only season previews and shit should ever be called chapter 0. the whole point of it being 0 is that you can skip it but YOU CANT SKIP THIS or chapter "1" drops you in the middle of nothing and references shit youve never heard of in relation to nothing you know. and then you have to go back and restart from the real beginning. infuriating.
 
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What a lame way to separate them. Just him alone randomly being damaged by a poison just from the random fights they all have been through
 

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Bruh, did he just steal some poor kid's body? The kid is now, in effect, dead?

That's a super messed up spell you made there man.. On a kid, no less.
 

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