1, thats not a loli, its a catgirl.
2. pls keep your watermarks out of the speech bubbles. Use credit page like everyone else.
3. undecided if this will be any good or not. The concept of it being a game and his first character died, is all wierd and shit. And the fact he walked out of a door and fell into it is just retarded. Use summoning circle or truck-kun ffs. Feel like the story set up in the first chapter is kinda bad.
