The Lady's Spaceship
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In case anyone is interested tappytoon just posted chapter 20 today
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Is this dropped? It's good so far tho 
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@enyoteremchi So how do you get coins? I went ahead and made an account but found out the chapters needed coins I didn't have...
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Ich liebe die Geschichte total.
Die ist so cool.
Ich Frage mich wann es hier endlich weiter geht?
Die ist so cool.
Ich Frage mich wann es hier endlich weiter geht?
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well i kind of realy like the story so i wont try to sound objective and just say that i have a weak point for smart pragmatist mc's
the thing i take issue with is the pacing as well as the chapter size
it suffers from the same affliction as most long strips that include too much non information in form of white or bubbles or other decorations and repetition or splitting of images that could have been compacted.
in essence being a long strip means that each chapter will contain far less panels and thus most likely less plot than the average manga chapter and this one here didnt go against that rule.
also the pacing is not that good useless stuff is highlighted like her sisters visit and the important (for her) bits like her training or the information gathering or even daily activities... you know the things a mc does in a story about the mc
are shortened or have only the result shown
if the useless bits were cut down while keeping the chapter size the same we could have already had 20% more plot
then again as it is a long strip it would be harsh to expect a break of traditions from it and as i said even then i quite like the story even if the author seems to take blond hair as a sign of low intelligence ( her mother is not all that smart about her daughter's and her sister never wonders what she will have to pay for the services she receives..)
edit: and yes i know what longstrip is and why it was created but lets be honest arent most authors abusing the longstrip format to hold out on content and stretch their story on the sly?
the thing i take issue with is the pacing as well as the chapter size
it suffers from the same affliction as most long strips that include too much non information in form of white or bubbles or other decorations and repetition or splitting of images that could have been compacted.
in essence being a long strip means that each chapter will contain far less panels and thus most likely less plot than the average manga chapter and this one here didnt go against that rule.
also the pacing is not that good useless stuff is highlighted like her sisters visit and the important (for her) bits like her training or the information gathering or even daily activities... you know the things a mc does in a story about the mc
are shortened or have only the result shown
if the useless bits were cut down while keeping the chapter size the same we could have already had 20% more plot
then again as it is a long strip it would be harsh to expect a break of traditions from it and as i said even then i quite like the story even if the author seems to take blond hair as a sign of low intelligence ( her mother is not all that smart about her daughter's and her sister never wonders what she will have to pay for the services she receives..)
edit: and yes i know what longstrip is and why it was created but lets be honest arent most authors abusing the longstrip format to hold out on content and stretch their story on the sly?
The pacing in this is pretty bad... I honestly thought that we missed panels or chapters bc suddenly MC knows all this information or the scene completely changes with no relation to the last chapter. I’m only on chapter 9, but I’ve already been lost a few times. Hopefully the pacing improves soon.
Edit: it doesn’t.
Edit: it doesn’t.
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I read this to the end out of sheer principle and it was not worth it. Terrible art, terrible story.
I know it starts of god, but don't be fooled, halfway through the damn thing the FL loses most of her IQ and needs to depend on the ML to save her. The ML sucks by the way and has no personality, but I guess others for the black-haired-stone-faced lead so YMMV. Personally I thought he was a needless prick for the majority of the piece.
The art quality drops significantly as the story goes on which doesn't help the experience.
I'm gonna spoil this as well: the spaceship doesn't become relevant to the story until the absolute very end (I'm talking like past chapter 60 IIRC), so for those hoping for science vs magic hijinks, prepare to be disappointed.
I know it starts of god, but don't be fooled, halfway through the damn thing the FL loses most of her IQ and needs to depend on the ML to save her. The ML sucks by the way and has no personality, but I guess others for the black-haired-stone-faced lead so YMMV. Personally I thought he was a needless prick for the majority of the piece.
The art quality drops significantly as the story goes on which doesn't help the experience.
I'm gonna spoil this as well: the spaceship doesn't become relevant to the story until the absolute very end (I'm talking like past chapter 60 IIRC), so for those hoping for science vs magic hijinks, prepare to be disappointed.
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I'm abandoning at chapter 47 for similar reasons, the mc doesn't look for her ship at all for a long time and a lot of stuff that happens isn't justified. Why is she going broke? Why is she not training more to get past her physical weakness? Why does the villain keep sending dozens (!) of assassins after people when they fail every time?
