The Lawyer Can't Choose the World He Protects - Vol. 2 Ch. 6 - Corrupt Nobles and Mayonnaise (Part 2)

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Inb4 there's a magic that can show you what happened in a certain time at a certain location for reenactment purposes
 
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How exactly are you supposed to prove theft in a world with no camera and the concept of reasonable doubt and conflict of interest (AKA it make anyone who work in the count's territory unfit as a witness)?
 
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still waiting for when the Mayonaisse take the stage.
Nah, it will be rice and or soy sauce before Mayonnaise is even considered.


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On second thought, maybe they will go the pork bowl route during some interrogation. I here that's all the rage in fictional crime dramas.
 
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Nah, it will be rice and or soy sauce before Mayonnaise is even considered.


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On second thought, maybe they will go the pork bowl route during some interrogation. I here that's all the rage in fictional crime dramas.
the title is Corrupt Nobles and MAYONNAISE though.
 
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This author seems really committed to proving that 'showing' is for cowards; real authors always tell.

Nope, that's a mistake. 'Show don't tell' is a useful guideline, but it isn't an absolute law of writing. There are some places where 'telling' is totally acceptable, if that improves the story's pacing. Everything is a matter of balance.
 

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