The Main Heroines Are Trying to Kill Me - Ch. 10

[Cybir]

Not even giving him a chance to play a villain, but instead straight ousting him immediately...

So finicky, ugh!

 

[Lando833]

man I hate these plot moments where MC takes a hit to protect someone... YOU HAVE A SWORD DAMMIT. It just breaks immersion.

It's another change from the novel to speed things up. Frey gets hit in the novels because he's in the middle of giving Kania some lifeforce again when Isolet suddenly backslashes him due to the brainwashing not wearing off yet.

 

[frey_raon_starligth]

I'm struggling to see WHY the wacky villain system is needed. Without its justification it just feels like a plot contrivance to this regression concept.

All we've been told is he needs "that item" to get his "happy ending"

The premise is interesting, but the execution has felt so lackluster.

It wants to feel like a video game but simultaneously not be one.

Because
This history likes adds elements to use more later
For a example glare you no gonna see her again in like…
70 chapters… or less

 

[exxeld]

Gotcha as I see it now the heroines will slowly start to realize mc has good intentions and by doing so kill him lmao so the name of the series has a double meaning lmao.

Both by their actual intentions to kill him and by realizing the truth they will kill his too, that’s charming.

The opening image having the heroines all lie around mc with his eyes closed leads me to believe this even more.

 

[HammerU89]

What story reveals all their threats and plot points in the first arc? None apparently.

If that vagueness is done poorly like this one than what's the point. They don't start info dumping until chapter 20 it seems? That's piss poor adaptation and why this is dogshit.

 

[Ekusupuroshion]

"Can I win against her?"
*instantly wins

... that's not how you build tension, raise the stakes or establish a character as powerful, mr Author.

 

[SuplexSensei]

Hot

Screw you. Same

 

[SuplexSensei]

Ngl, I would be giddy whenever a precious heroine realizes that MC (i.e. Frey) has been secretly good.

But here I just feel bad.
Somebody PLEASE take that stack of death, epilepsy, cardiac arrest, or whatever out from this tragic boi

It looks painful asf

 

[Kaarme]

It's another change from the novel to speed things up. Frey gets hit in the novels because he's in the middle of giving Kania some lifeforce again when Isolet suddenly backslashes him due to the brainwashing not wearing off yet.

The original author must not have been happy the manhwa adaption made the scene idiotic.

 

[totaly_random_guy]

bro did not even last a week

 

[vali007]

This adaptation has really weird pacing, they skipped a bunch of stuff, including the info dump at the start. Looks like they're finally touching on it around chapter 20 of this webtoon.

Spoiler: infodump from chapter 1 of the novel

So in chapter 1 of the novel, it mentions that the Hero from 1000 years ago, the one who wrote the prophecy, is just straight up from another world. His ancestor was playing a video game called "Dark Tale Fantasy" and called it a piece of shit before losing consciousness and getting isekai'd into it.

Frey's story 1000 years after the first hero takes place during "Dark Tale Fantasy 2", the "prophecy" is a magically made walkthrough for the game.

So it really is a piece of shit.