The Main Heroines Are Trying to Kill Me - Ch. 11

[ChillyBot__]

I mean this is slop, but its good slop. Sad it doesnt take itself as seriously as it could but still worth to read over some of the other stuff going around.

 

[Network4444]

Not just this.
She didn't even get to have much time to muse much over his conflicting actions and her resulting view of him.
Should she consider that maybe he isn't all that bad? Can she find it within herself to accept it?

No, instead of an internal moral conflict spread out a bit, the whole things is resolved and handed to her on a silver platter.

I was really onboard with the pacing of this until this point.

I disagree as I assume that what she sees is us as readers have already seen before. So if as a reader you can sympathise and understand why the MC did what he did then it should be the same for her. It’s sort of make sense in the story as it would be hard without the person who is literally the closest to the MC to find out. Plus it also serves the purpose of showing the reader what will happen if the other women find out

 

[Mekanize94]

The revelation in the novel was more impactful than the manhwa that I even shed a tears..
Lots of things were left out..

 

[SuplexSensei]

Fck, best girl Kania.

I'm partially glad that the penalty comes in stacks. At least Frey isn't dead yet. And hey, her being that biased again towards the young master isn't all for nothing. There's an insider now within the activities of those who wish to kill Frey, after all. She's helping him towards his cause, even if she may not realize it at first.

It feels a bit odd to see this lady butler forgive Frey after the betrayal, world-decimation, and mistreatment. Frey is correct for his lack of justification on all the atrocities he committed.

Man's unforgivable.

He has a spot in hell for his sins. Now he's just doing all he can, anyway, to give a Good End for the people he cherished.

As for Kania, maybe she changed to how she is because she got to see "his truest self" and that's where her feelings gravitated: into love and devotion, her most basic state, as she had always been since before all that transpired.

Oh, and my heart just aches when I see a good girl cry lmao

 

[Kaarme]

Her reaction to finding out is a little underwhelming tbh

Not necessarily. She already possessed memories of her alternate life, which is why she, and the other main girls, wanted to murder Frey. But those memories don't contain only the scene of her death; she would remember also the whole lost war against the demons and humanity perishing. So, what exactly does Frey and her own life count for compared to that? Her murderous rage was due to believing Frey betrayed humans, including Kanie herself, but now she learned he only did it to defeat the demons and create this second scenario they are now living.

I'd say her reaction was quite understandable for someone who was able to let go of her personal revenge and switch all of her attention to much bigger issues, like the future war against the demons.

 

[FossilKaseki]

Read up to here after reading the novel for so long.
I’m extremely disappointed by just how bad they fumbled this. It felt like all of the tension and emotion was wiped out from this scene, making me just ask, “Is that it?”

I saw someone saying this is slop and…well, I can’t blame them if this is the quality that the manhwa is going to stick with. Hopefully they don’t and the readers who stick with this gets some better payoff than this.

 

[KkakKa]

well his inner child its devious just like Kaneki when apeared as a ghoul child in haise mind

 

[Shamgarsan]

The aggressive pacing is an issue and doesn’t leave room for the gravity of things to set in. Splurting blood for a panel or two isn’t enough to correctly establish the stakes of being discovered. For the manhwa, they could have inserted a visual motif like a magical hourglass over him suddenly cracking and leaking sand. Or been more graphic with the damage being done. Embrace the media change to convey the necessary information and tone.

 

[ARealCoolGuy]

"The main Heroines are trying to kill me"
Has one of the main heroines forgive him ten chapters in.

 

[AzzoleOddone]

I disagree as I assume that what she sees is us as readers have already seen before. So if as a reader you can sympathise and understand why the MC did what he did then it should be the same for her.

unfortunately what this manhwa has shown us before is fucking nothing
as a reader i sympathise with him way less than with random henchmen extras (from other works) that look like they were forced down this path in some way even if it was never said in the comic/manhwa/manhua/manga

novel's way better from what i've heard tho