Things being slightly out of order is perfectly normal in an adaptation and delaying the order to when the characters have a characters have a longer interaction makes perfect sense for a comic's pacing. It hardly mattered that it was moved from the short interaction to a longer one so they could fit the other two scenes into the 25th chapter. I get changes in adaptations are frustrating. "Paranoid Mage" is a great example of frustrating changes but don't let it ruin the read for yaThat demon radar is a rather convenient item that I totally don't remember existing in the novel at all.
Frey's order for Serena to "doubt" him happened last chapter in the novel when Serena showed up... this adaptation makes him look like an absolute idiot.
The penalty is one of the most dangerous things looming over Frey's head, the fact that he basically postponed giving the order for an entire day is insane. It subtly changes his characterization to be so incredibly careless.Things being slightly out of order is perfectly normal in an adaptation and delaying the order to when the characters have a characters have a longer interaction makes perfect sense for a comic's pacing. It hardly mattered that it was moved from the short interaction to a longer one so they could fit the other two scenes into the 25th chapter. I get changes in adaptations are frustrating. "Paranoid Mage" is a great example of frustrating changes but don't let it ruin the read for ya
You could also just assume he couldn't get a word in edgewise because she was controlling the conversation and used the rest of the day to think on his actions rather than immediately firing off ordersThe penalty is one of the most dangerous things looming over Frey's head, the fact that he basically postponed giving the order for an entire day is insane. It subtly changes his characterization to be so incredibly careless.
From the system window she has it seems in this turn at least the demon queen has upped her game. I’m assuming the amulet came from her system which is why it works. MC stating the advantage the system gives him seems to make it clear enough.Seems the hero's amulet didnt worked to detect the demon.![]()
It's an overall problem I have with this adaptation. Frey feels very indecisive, like he's doing things without any real planning, or in this case, takes days to come to the same conclusion as he would minutes in the novels. The funny thing is that Serena is also controlling the conversation in the novels, but I think the way it was presented in the novels was so much more interesting.You could also just assume he couldn't get a word in edgewise because she was controlling the conversation and used the rest of the day to think on his actions rather than immediately firing off orders
Serena is really good.
I might move to read the novel soon because I am quite invested to the story
Demon queen (Ruby) also has a system and has to choose a similar but opposite path to the MC.From the system window she has it seems in this turn at least the demon queen has upped her game. I’m assuming the amulet came from her system which is why it works. MC stating the advantage the system gives him seems to make it clear enough.
I could be wrong, it might only react to the girl after she turns but considering it’s the amulet that‘s making the crow undetectable I don’think I am.
I need a Serena in my life. Also, I do have a soft spot for Himedere types as well. The blonde chick is more "hime" than "dere" but I'd still like for her to be happy.