A lot of these stories feature the "system windows" as some sort of crutch to force things to happen or to get things going faster, but this is somehow even more the case here. The only reason he's going to do anything is because a magic window tells him to. The entire premise is "an omnipotent magic thing you can 100% trust told you how to go through the story". This fucking sucks.
It's boring. I want him to feel like he needs to do it, I want him to waver and start doubting himself, I want him to make actual decisions, I don't want the writer to insert himself in there and tell him to do it.
It's boring. I want him to feel like he needs to do it, I want him to waver and start doubting himself, I want him to make actual decisions, I don't want the writer to insert himself in there and tell him to do it.
