The Male Lead's Little Lion Daughter - Ch. 97

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dialogue feels a bit weird
is it just me?
little bit

some of the things being said and the exposition were being treated as stand alone when they're supposed to flow together, each as their own idea

it's miles better than Lua though, and I'm glad to see Scylla hasn't dropped this cause of the MTL group posting chapters faster
 

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