The One Within the Villainess - Vol. 3 Ch. 12 - New World Order

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FOR EMI :win:
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Even if she plays everything like it's for Emi or for her revenge, you can't think of all these things without being a good person yourself. Remi may want to say it's an act, but she's a good bean!!
p30 (last panel) is basically "fate worse than death." It prolongs the story because killing Pina and even getting away with it would be easy, but handing out the fate worse than death can be quite difficult. It's also used to show how evil the character is.
 
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Is it just me, or some dialogues feel like have grammatical error.
Not just you. Angel should’ve said ‘there were many who felt they were abandoned’
Than when those who had previous received divine favor. It should’ve been ‘we’ not ‘I’.

Renege trapped by the lord of heavens, that mortals began slaying gods. Plus there’s some spelling mistakes.

Either way I do appreciate the scanlation team
 
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Page 6 is a mess
  • "you complement" -> "you compliment"
  • "It is because my inability to quell the frenzy has led to days of unbearable suffering." -> The syntax makes no sense. "because" is missing a "that" later in the sentence or an "of" just after.
  • "why do I not harbour resentement" -> it should be "why do you not harbour resentment" (or "don't you")

The homophonous mistake is common and easily understandable, so no worries, but the incomplete sentence and the reverse meaning makes the page a pain to read. I haven't read the rest. :/
 
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Even if she plays everything like it's for Emi or for her revenge, you can't think of all these things without being a good person yourself. Remi may want to say it's an act, but she's a good bean!!
Well we do see at the beginning that Emi's 'emotions and memories' literally flowed through her, so i'm sure it's influenced her as well

It's nice to see her take on "I'll screw over everyone by being the ideal woman Emi thinks I am" that ends up helping more ppl versus the 'original' Villainess Remilia burning the world (well, 'poisoning with miasma')

Although while i'm sure some ppl would wanna see more bloodlust (or the prince being punched at least once versus being 'humiliated' even if he doesn't get 'executed'/exiled), ruining their social life (esp as like a 'noble' back then) does have its own satisfaction, since someone's reputation being trashed might be 'worse' than death for some ppl, i wouldn't be surprised if one of the 'harem' guys ended up committing suicide b/c of it but i don't think the novel got that dark or so
 
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p30 (last panel) is basically "fate worse than death." It prolongs the story because killing Pina and even getting away with it would be easy, but handing out the fate worse than death can be quite difficult. It's also used to show how evil the character is.
Basically Uno Reverse on the classic "Condemnation/banishment" trope at the beginning lol, exposing "Pina" in front of the whole kingdom and her having a Danganronpa/Ace Attorney style breakdown would be great to see animated
 
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Dang Remilia is really having big brain moment to make preparation in torturing that bitch...i like it
 
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Is it just me, or some dialogues feel like have grammatical error.
Yeah, it does. I think they were maybe working a bit too quickly. However, I don't feel too bothered by it considering how much work they did. If they ever do fix it, that'd be nice, but it's not something I wanna demand imo.
 

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