The Otome Heroine's Fight for Survival - Vol. 1 Ch. 5

Dex-chan lover
Joined
Aug 2, 2019
Messages
1,325
bruh, the first chapter of this manga literally starts with a reincarnated person. if you didn't want to read that type of manga why didn't you stop then?
Aaah... It seems i made it look bad...

1. I don't hate the genre. I don't even complain in the 1st chapter

2. I don't care 1 that only a one off. All i care is that the ML or FML is the focus for the "extraordinary". I don't really mind of there is someone else that is extraordinary as long as it made sense, and this doesn't. It feels like she is just there to create conflict, not to bring the plot further.
Admitedly, she will later on have a big role in the plot especially after the Yandere is introduced. But compared to the Yandere and Elena who are Aria's "Kindred", she is just there... Exist... If this is Naruto story, she is Sakura. She has a role and she exist, but story wise, she doesn't really exist... If this is a game, She will be random knight of kingdom A.

3. My only complain is that her introduction feels like it was to make the story have a reincarnator. I'm just annoyed that after the one at the start, i thought it would be about Aria's journey in a fantasy world with different value than the original story. That feels fresh you know. It's not about someone's Journey in a borrowed or stolen body. It's about a journey of someone who is cursed with knowledge. Yet, they decide to drop another reincarnated after the 1st one died... Heck, the first one is not even "dead" dead. Her plan from the 1st chapter still going since there is a slum kid who accidentally found the stone while cleaning the gutter and got her body taken over. IF that is still going, why add another one...
 
Fed-Kun's army
Joined
Jan 22, 2020
Messages
119
These reincarnators are coming out of the woodwork. Next thing we know all the male leads of the otome game are reincarnators and its just a mess of reincarnators hiding that they are reincarnators from reincarnators that they dont know are reincarnators. Damn I said reincarnators a lot.
 
Member
Joined
Jan 17, 2023
Messages
29
Bro... How did the logic jump from "ok let's remember the events" then "no good i cannot avoid it" and "we gotta kill the heroine" in two pages?!?! 🤨🤨🤨
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 19, 2023
Messages
6,729
The way the hole in the wall looks doesn't match what the actual wall looks like. A wall like that would be solid for at least a meter, and that's only if there's a room right there. Otherwise it'd be stone all the way through.

"We won't be involved anymore."
lol.

"I can still only do addition and subtraction, though."
And she can think in percentages, which is multiplication. Although I don't think that's been shown in the manga.

"Oi, Ash Smeared."
And so it begins.

Shuri's cute nodding.

And here we have a rare case of an isekai villainess who's not the main character. The main character is actually the main character, which is rare.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 22, 2023
Messages
289
Wtf instead of befriending the heroine or avoiding her or breaking off her engagement, she concludes the best way is to kill her.
Author really shows how inept he is at writing
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top