I think the problem is that there's too much plot for the medium. The majority of the chapters are 4 or 5 pages, with some going to 6 or 7. Chapters 6 & 7 (and the Twitter extras) each had 10, but those have been outliers. There isn't enough room to have things properly develop.Welp, story is honestly down the gutter for me, since her introduction and the focus shifted to her <_<.. At this point I don't even want MC to date Sono anymore x_x
Girl gets treated nicely > Doesn't think much of them.She's very relatable to fall in love with a girl who called her stupid.
You hit the nail on the head perfectly. There's too many spinning plates for a story that has chapters with 4 pages. I think we'd be better off if the focus was on 1 or 2 characters.I think the problem is that there's too much plot for the medium. The majority of the chapters are 4 or 5 pages, with some going to 6 or 7. Chapters 6 & 7 (and the Twitter extras) each had 10, but those have been outliers. There isn't enough room to have things properly develop.
And it's not even like @Gramine is behind, because this chapter was just posted on the 5th.
Been a while since I’d seen the “nice guys” shtick in the wild. I thought this shit has died out.Girl gets treated nicely > Doesn't think much of them.
Girl gets treated like shit > Goes head over heels for them.
Yeah, that pretty much checks out.
Not sure about what @orangerain7734 meant, but lesbians, like ourself, go wild for mean girls.Been a while since I’d seen the “nice guys” shtick in the wild. I thought this shit has died out.
It's not even about 'nice guys finishing last' anymore. Today's girls keep complaining about not finding the 'right man' when they don't realize they're destroying themselves seeing guys that treat them like shit.Been a while since I’d seen the “nice guys” shtick in the wild. I thought this shit has died out.