Actually....that editor uses the common sense of the industry...which in turn produces so much soulless trash. She is a trash editor. She yells at him to produce tit drawings, something she could find everywhere on the internet and could hire the artists for, from him, a guy that clearly is more talented for stories. That's like you hire a garden architect and tell him to grab a hoe an start plowing the fields. If he can't draw tits, he can't draw tits! Let him do his job and hire an assistant drawer for the sex senses! There is a limit on how stingy a company can be with its budget. And let's be honest here: He is right! You just want some soulless porn? There is enough out there for free. Only those that trigger something in you are worth their money. Looks like that company does not want to be successful.
Also: Beautiful woman approaches. Hey, you! Let me feed you. Btw, I know your name and just came to you to tell you, "I'm gonna CHANGE YOUR LIFE!." Whhhoaaa.....Hello, police officer? That person over there!
And that advice. "If you want his trust, I guess you have to spy more on his life." Stalker just has to stalk harder to be loved. Ingenious! The creepiest part about her introduction was, that she knew his name!
But no kidding. Aside from that mentally retarded editor, I really like the setup. Clueless stalker fan babe with money hunts down her target, which actually would help him. This really shouldn't feel as wholesome as it does. Looking forward for the next chapters.