The Reincarnated King of Fists - Ch. 1

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Lmao. I absolutely love the initial perspective of the demon king. True bafflement towards the hero party. And the High elf post tan being called a dark elf.
 
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Its nice seeing an alternative take on the WoW Horde with eastern fantasy mixed in
 
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What if the indigenous tribes of America were not human but instead fantastical humanoid creatures; The Manwha.

Bad guys (99% of the human race) are different levels of irredeemable selfish trash.

I’m sure the Orcs, Trolls, Elves, and Dwarves would all be nature loving pacifists frolicking together in harmony if not for the stinkin’ human race!

Despite the progressive narrative it is decent, albeit still slop. Lobotomy not required to enjoy!

EDIT: I’ve gotten to Chapter 35 and while I now do see where the author is coming from (Especially with all of the MC’s comments in the beginning) it is still baffling to why most humans are written as generic evil doers with no redeemable qualities. MC’s party (especially the swordsman) is treated as ignorant, but not evil. Same with the priest. The point the author was trying to make would have been much better if the antagonists so far were actual characters rather than one dimensional mustache-twirling villains that only served a single purpose (to be defeated).
 
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ts so stupid, he should've had humans in his Antares Empire too. After that, the humans shouldn't have been able to win the war against the Antares Empire because just the king could take out all but one of the hero party. If the king fought the hero party with his four demon kings, he probably would've won easily with multiple strong front-liners stalling the Fist King as the 'demon lord' and his best mages stacked debuffs, curses, poisons, etc. on the Fist King until they could decisively kill him.

Since they had the dwarves, they should've had better gear, technology, and infrastructure than the humans.
Since they had the elves, they should've had better agriculture, medicines, and magic than the humans.
Since they had the orcs and trolls, they should've had much greater brute strength than the humans.
If they had simply invited human immigrants as well, then there would be nothing at all which the human empire should've been better at aside from numbers and being homogenous.. But even the numbers thing doesn't make sense because usually Orcs reproduce a lot, and if they have goblins or even slimes, they should have zero reason to lose from numbers.

Plus, if they had humans living alongside them, the racist human factions would've gotten more cognitive dissonance. "Hey, maybe we can live alongside them after all?"

And finally, if too many of the humans in this story are just racist dumbasses then it loses nuance just to shoehorn in a large group as the bad guys without good reason. If the main character could so easily get along with all the other races, then the other humans in this world shouldn't have that hard of a time doing so either.
 

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