Exactly, the flow of the chapter is all over over the place and it's a mess. So much for a plan when they just fail miserably in 5s, which in itself is already a bad sign of writing. What happen in those 30 pages could easily have take 3 chapters. I can see how it's ending soon.This chapter did not make very much sense
Did you know where to read it?Axe-kun is never kind.
Apparently the original novel was incredibly slow-paced, at least from what people are saying (Haven't read it yet) so it might be a good read if this'll end up unsatisfying.
And the artwork being lacking for anything other than "cuteness", and action scenes, and... Etc.the only two things holding this back are, the pacing and character development.
well, yes this too, but i was talking about the story, not the manga in general. But any way, even if it's lacking in art, it still feels nice enough for it to not be a problem, for me at least.And the artwork being lacking for anything other than "cuteness", and action scenes, and... Etc.
At this point I only still read it because I started, which I know is a sunk cost fallacy. But man, I'm reminded of how poor this is every time.