What the heck happened in the end? MC sees the princess and... activates some kind of golden vision? (Is it one of his powers I've forgotten?) The searcher approaches the princess' table and... big untranslated sound effect. Was he stabbed or cut, or was it, like, a "BATHUMP" signalling his foreboding or something?
Man, I really do prefer to have sound effects translated, even if just tiny notes on the side (but not those wordy ones like "SFX: the eerie, forlorn atmosphere of a place that is usually bustling with people but is now abandoned and quiet"); IMHO, seeing "clang" or "whoosh" aid in interpreting events and increase immersion.