@prstone Thank you. Even if it only seems to amount to some small changes, the translation reads and flows so much better than before, it's like night and day. No more having to stop every other bubble to strain the brain for a second just to parse the weird grammar, it's nice. Oh and, i guess it's nice that the watermarks are gone, too. 😅
It sounds like you are planning on only changing chp. 91-93 though, is that right? Because they're not the only chapters with water marks. For example, uuuh... <opens random chapter> chapter 103 also has a watermark on like the very first page.