The Spark in Your Eyes - Vol. 1 Ch. 21 - A Place To Stay (5)

[l3avemdead]

translation is dogshit, can't let one English speaker proofread your shit? fucking hell

 

[Shelly]

Good, you tell him off Griselda.

 

[Mikhab]

You crossed the line môn chèri that’s not how you things if you want to get along with them...

 

[Kerori]

The blond one is ruining his nice face with his shitty personality.

 

[AceTheBase]

Fuck that guy, i will never come to like him in this story. he should up and die

 

[dingo12345]

I get that he is upset about his family dying in the war, but to take his anger out on someone who was not related to the war and just because he was a Northerner? That's just stupidity to umpteenth degree. I hope he pisses off soon

 

[looc64]

He got off pretty easy here. His little tirade was the equivalent of a video game boss attack that exposes a massive weakpoint.

"It's a pity [that I couldn't fight in the war and kill a bunch of northerners]" -> "It's a pity [that you didn't die in the war like your dumb brothers.]"

Lotta meat there.

 

[Trendy_Burritoo]

the translations funky again hmmmmmmmm good chapter though