lots of poor English, but the following sentences hit me the hardest
"look how many these vegetables are" what kind of sentence is that?
"he was a reckless man since the old days but now it seems he's living only for work" surely you mean that he was a reckless man in the past, but isnt anymore?
"or is it that mouse, is that thing is made of magic itself...." is what?
"the farmers who works honestly are in trouble"
"well done on returning"