The Strongest Wizard Becomes a Countryside Guardsman After Taking an Arrow to the Knee - Ch. 13.2 - I was the Strongest Sorcerer. And Then I Returned…

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great job Levelers
thx for the update, i didn't notice any issues
so as far as im concerned everythings all good
 
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@Leveler

On the first page you had Millet refer to herself and her sister as "they" instead of "we" and "them" instead of "us". The next panel had Al saying "...I think I worried them" where it should have been "...I think I worried you"

On page 3, the village chief probably meant to say either "she" or "Millet" told him that Al had "a request", rather than "an request"

An page 8 Vivi should be saying "...I did most of the work"

Great job otherwise
 
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Dude is living his best life, chilling with peeps and casually slaying dragons.
 
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And the village chief was like: Amazing! You've slayed several dragons. That's really great, Al-san but...
When are you going to impregnate the elf?
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I mean, come on. That's the original plan of why we lured you here in our village.
 
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This is nice, this can be made into an anime (fortunately)
A Slice of Life Isekai... Yeah that needs to be a thing in anime cause there are are barely any isekai animes with a well-known reputation for being a Slice of Life Isekai
 

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