The Thorn That Pierces Me - Ch. 10

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The back and forth flashbacks are throwing me off 😅 tho i appreciate the changing povs of the characters, it's making the flow a bit messy imo 🥴 still good art aha
 
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10 chapters in and they're still in the woods and romancing each other.

At the rate the story is going, i'm starting to think that the THORN mentioned in the title is actually the ML's 🤣🤣🤣 iykwim😉
 
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I really don't want the flashback right now, why didn't the story just move until the characters take some peaceful rest first then just a short flash back.
 

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