The Transmigrated Mage Life in Another World, Becoming the Strongest in the World with the Knowledge of the Original Story - Ch. 3

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Ok so we are already having writing issues here, he knows the world like the back of his hand so why does he need a guide?

If they later say "only an elf can guide you" I'll be more forgiving but not having that info this chapter is dumb if so

Also I can't believe he just let those killers go, not even sent them the guards...
 
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Ok so we are already having writing issues here, he knows the world like the back of his hand so why does he need a guide?

If they later say "only an elf can guide you" I'll be more forgiving but not having that info this chapter is dumb if so

Also I can't believe he just let those killers go, not even sent them the guards...
Pretty sure it's a common trope that only elves can navigate their way to the elven hometown.
 
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Ok so we are already having writing issues here, he knows the world like the back of his hand so why does he need a guide?

If they later say "only an elf can guide you" I'll be more forgiving but not having that info this chapter is dumb if so

Also I can't believe he just let those killers go, not even sent them the guards...
I mean, if you write about a fantasy world its not like you suddenly know the entire geography of the world you've made up.
 
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Also I can't believe he just let those killers go, not even sent them the guards...
These vignettes are amplified childhood fantasies of defeating bullies. The limitations on what a kid could do if somehow victorious in real life are mirrored by the idiocy of not killing or crippling the perpetrators in the fictional conflict.

Here, we have the special stupidity of the would-be killers stunned by sword slashes.
 
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Not only is this story paced like a long-strip manhwa, but the art has the crudities typical of manhwa.

Others may remain morbidly curious, but I'm done.
 
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Ok so we are already having writing issues here, he knows the world like the back of his hand so why does he need a guide?

If they later say "only an elf can guide you" I'll be more forgiving but not having that info this chapter is dumb if so

Also I can't believe he just let those killers go, not even sent them the guards...
It's probably something like a race issue. Maybe something like "he needs a permission from an elf to get into an elven territory because he is a human, and human is hated in elven territory, as human is inferior to elves".
 

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Others may remain morbidly curious, but I'm done.
This is such a good quote LOL

As for this series I still find it somewhat interesting. Well, not really, but it has the potential to be interesting. Let's see where it goes
 
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He knows all the forbidden knowledge. Also did he write the sizes in his book or what?
Probably a character sheet where men don't have much beyond their names and women have their birthmarks positions detailed to a mm.
 

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