The Two With the Wall - The Two With The Wall

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That's really neato, literally using the manga paneling to tell a story/conflict.
 
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woah impressive premise and actually expressing anguish well enough to invoke empathy from the reader in so few pages.
 
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i just halfway through reading this... and i already now what kinda story is this about....
 
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A rival appears. To be continued...

It's an amusing manga but I don't see too much potential for an ongoing series without drama.

Hopefully the title delivers and it doesn't go through overused clichées.
 

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So technically they have their own love interests in their own world, but they fell for each other.
 
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looks like the author would continue this, and I hope itll get a serialization
 
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The only way to save them is for this work to be animated and get ride of the panels
 
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It's an interesting idea and the execution was technically decent, but in my opinion it didn't work in practice as well as it probably seemed to work as an idea in the author's mind. One clear problem is that it was really obvious they are somehow separed from how the comic was drawn, with practically no tricks used to try to fool the reader. This just kind of lacked any oomph. There are some jolly good oneshots out there, and this could have been one as well if the author had got some feedback and rewritten the script to be craftier. I'm only criticising this because I see the potential and the idea is novel.
 
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Saw the art, just the very first panel, and instantly thought is that . . . ? Nah, can't be! But I checked and no surprise the mangaka of Chio-chan delivers the funny with a bit of emotion on the side.
 

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