Review of this story (read up to chapter 21):
This story is a 2D representation of what would happen if we were to watch a bot play a game with full cheats while the bot's owner monologues his thoughts. And not the entertaining kind that streamers do. At least streamers put in the effort to make things interesting!
Everyone feels 1-dimensional, no personality, no relationships, nothing. Scripted NPCs.
The MC has the ultimate plot armor in addition to a walkthrough complete with all known game breaking bugs in his head that makes him behave like an NPC too (hence my reference to a bot).
Fun read for anyone that doesn't want to think. It's so bland that I can't even remember the MC's name and had to go back to find it (Jinfrey).
It's a shame since the premise & world seems interesting. So much untapped potential.
I do hope however that the author makes the story interesting soon.