I aggree about the pacing and in part about the characterization. But to say there is no plot literally contradicts the pacing issue. Both problems are mutually exclusive, so please decide which critique you want to go with. As for the isekai thing, show me one story where it´s thematised beyond the protagonist randomly introducing food and board games, making it redundant anyway.Boring with absolutely no characterization, pacing is janky and awkward, plot is nonexistent (who here forgot more than once that this is an isekai villainess story?) And does nothing interesting or new. Read literally any other child FL isekai/regression story.
My death flags show no signs of disappearing?I aggree about the pacing and in part about the characterization. But to say there is no plot literally contradicts the pacing issue. Both problems are mutually exclusive, so please decide which critique you want to go with. As for the isekai thing, show me one story where it´s thematised beyond the protagonist randomly introducing food and board games, making it redundant anyway.
interesting. i will check those out, when i have time. Thank you!My death flags show no signs of disappearing?
Eminence is shadow?
Surviving the game as a Barbarian?
What do you see with those murky eyes?
Among others...
In the romance/isekai Crossroads... I've got nothing...