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Angelica gets burned ugly and can only spit bitter words, last time I read she is on a deathbed, dying or something. I dunno what happened after as it was not yet translated as I read it.
I'll spoil it for you all so don't click. If you do that's on YOU.
Angelica will be okay. Olivia will be fine. However everyone else...
I think the author dropped the ball in the last 2 chapters. Anne Olivia goes mad with war. Leon tries to save the princesses but fails cause Anne Olivia made Herthrude drink poison and she obeys (this was a brainlet moment imo). Leon gets her to the cell but she is dying. So he takes off to Fanoss to deliver her to Hertauda before she dies.
Meanwhile Fanoss is dealing with a coup plotted by Anne Olivia, the prime minister and that Fanoss general (Not Dark knight, he was killed by Leon way way before). So long story short Herthrude dies in the arms of her little sister, Leon saves them and they join the coalition of nobles lead by Angelica's sister to defeat Anne Olivia.
Huge battle, everybody dies. 3 stooges die like d*mbasses and only Julius and Jilk survive. Meanwhile Leon aboard Arroganz (with new AI cause Luxion is nowhere to be found) go to face Anne Olivia.
Angelica wakes up and convinces Marie to go to Leon. So they do follow a secret underground passage into the palace.
They all meet in the throne room where Leon is unable to act because he is indecisive when he's needed the most. All he had to do is kill Anne Olivia (yeah you might be thinking that's unfair but believe me that was the best choice here. Olivia later on even acknoledges it since she admits she willingly allowed Anne to get into her body because she was insecure of herself).
So Marie has to act. She kinda awakens her saint power and fights Anne Olivia overwhelming her. Then beats the hell out of her.
The other Anne (the one following Leon and Marie around. You know the one that wants them to get married already) comes out. Talk no Jutsu and both Annes decide to fuse and sleep within Marie. Leon is worried af but accepts. However author said "nah too happy of an ending. Let's f*ck around some more."
So fused Anne is suddenly consummed by Mary (the spirit of her younger sister. Always jealous because Anne took interest in the guy she fell in love with, Leon's ancestor Leah). So she goes on a rampage again, Jilk appears to defend her in an armor suit (robot) but she kills him from behind. Julius appears but she kills him also (both die like d*mbasses ngl. The fate of simps).
Marie steps forward and f*cks up Mary's plan with brute force. Just when everything is over and they are celebrating, Leon gets shot and falls. Marie goes desperately using the magic she has left to heal Leon. She begs Olivia and she helps her.
Luxion appears, it was him the one that shot Leon. He confesses his master servant contract was null some time ago when Anne Olivia attacked him, making it possible to create a breach in his system. Leon tries to talk but can't do it because he is dying. Luxion confesses he's been f*cking every country up and working behind the scenes with Anne Olivia. He takes everything and leaves. Meanwhile his main body (Spaceship) goes in a rampage destroying the capital and both armies fighting outside.
Arroganz arrives and Marie out of options protects Leon's body with her own, hugging him. Turns out Arroganz (now an AI independent of Luxion) came to defend Leon and Marie. He takes them (with Angie and Olivia) into Partner (Leon's ship).
Okay so out of screen almost every other character dies by Luxion's laser beams including Angie's brother, every friend of the academy, Leon's father and even Nicks, now married to Dorothea (this was actually shown which makes it worse).
So there is no one alive except Leon, Marie and Olivia.
Angie's dad goes literally crazy living in a fantasy. Olivia is invaded by s*icidal thoughts and Leon decides to face Luxion with the help of Arroganz.
So the author decided to f*ck up the story even more. Leon decides to act like Marie was always his old world's sister and she falls in a trap. He tells her he will break the engagement and that he almost kissed her (so no happy ending for Marie even in this timeline). Marie tries to stop him but he takes off with Arroganz against the army of AI lead by Luxion. The fight is kinda quick, Luxion admits he made a mistake but it's too late. Leon is fatally wounded. He wishes Marie to "live happily" (brainlet moment since all she wanted was him, but he destroyed her heart, leaving her depressed and crying then went to die like a d*mbass) then dies. Luxion also dies after Leon, telling Arroganz to protect marie.
So Arroganz arrives to Partner without Leon. Everybody celebrates the fall of the AI army and Luxion while Marie cries looking more miserable than ever. She just wishes to meet Leon again if there is a God that's her only wish then she would do it right to get a happy ending with him.
There is an epilogue (very d*mb epilogue) with Leon at the start of the story. He crosses paths with Marie. They stare at each other and she just asks "what?". He chickens out and flees with Luxion on stealth mode. She goes to where Julius will be and Leon sees Olivia. The end. (I am guessing this implies the Marie route came before Mobseka?)
So personally I think the author just wanted to piss everybody off by killing every character off. Marie is without a doubt the best (and written also) girl in the entire series (girls become brainlet harem drones in Mobseka let's be honest). Her interactions with Leon put Olivia and Angie to shame (in comparison to Mobseka)
The story would be justifiable if Marie and Leon got the happy ending. However I am guessing the author chickened out because of critics if they get married (even though they aren't blood related anymore). Also she went for the saddest possible ending. Too bad it feels like a badly written edgy fanfic in those last two chapters.
I seriously hope this other story doesnt follow the Marie route or it will feel like another waste of time.
