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@Naiyro
But the first 19 Days presented the format of 1 Day a chapter, with the day number at the top and days remaining at the bottom...... And then it drops that. This is what I'm saying they didn't commit to....... Chapters 1-19 versus Chapters 20+ look and feel like they were either done by different people or done very far apart from each other.
Not saying that it's invalid for the story having a timeline of 100 days between beginning and end.... just that the Author DID present this as 1 Chapter for 1 Day and then gave up on that 19% of the way through.
EDIT: We're dangerously close to the Author just doing something like Chapter 67 - Day 42pt12 or Chapter 107 - Day 87pt3.......
But the first 19 Days presented the format of 1 Day a chapter, with the day number at the top and days remaining at the bottom...... And then it drops that. This is what I'm saying they didn't commit to....... Chapters 1-19 versus Chapters 20+ look and feel like they were either done by different people or done very far apart from each other.
Not saying that it's invalid for the story having a timeline of 100 days between beginning and end.... just that the Author DID present this as 1 Chapter for 1 Day and then gave up on that 19% of the way through.
EDIT: We're dangerously close to the Author just doing something like Chapter 67 - Day 42pt12 or Chapter 107 - Day 87pt3.......